I will update my reviews once the chater count goes up. Writing Quality - Currently it's lacking but since author is new it's fine to experiment. Keep in mind your first book is going to be worst but you don't stop writing. Cause next attempt is going to be even better than this. Story Development - I can't say clearly it gives the feel of fast pace with the quick rejection and the ball coming up. Character Design - I kinda like Mc but i hope author don't goes with the troupe 'she is not like other girls she rides horses, or she has brown hair hazel nut eyes her hair put in a bun without efforts but she looked stunning. At the same time she compliments about her looks. to her it felt people didn't respect her for who she was but only looked at her face.' Her dad kinda gets a warning from me. Let your daughter have a choice. (Quite hypocritical of me i know.) and i want him to have an intro bro got done bad. I know he is a side character but he is her father give him some paragraph. The nanny 5 stars Updating Stability - Take your time 😁 Quality over quantity. World background - It seemed to be historic with royalty but i can't tell the time period. I am sure it's going to be a good novel. Keep up the good work author. Don't be demotivated by anything.
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