Can't exactly judge because it only has one chapter though the premise seems very interesting also, I will provide a helpful advice pls give quotation marks since it will help readers to differentiate between quotes and narrative. Hoping to see more
mahe_ale_aba
ถูกใจ 3 คน
ถูกใจhey can u update ur review since the chapter count has gotten way above since last time and i have tried to fix the mistakes
mahe_ale_aba:thank uu i will keep that in mind