Review Detail of EvilBlueCrystal in Ascension Past Mediocrity

The transmigration aspect is poorly explained and lacks any intrigue, the unrealistic and unexplained discovery of a bottle that grants the protagonist super intelligence. [idea similar the first 17 chapters of the novel Possessing Nothing but badly executed] The protagonist's supposed intelligence and their actual behavior, instead of speaking and acting intelligently, the protagonist starts screaming, behaves in a weird and edgy manner, and comes across as downright insane and immature. The protagonist finds themselves in a situation where they have to survive based on sheer luck, rather than their supposedly intelligent use of skills. The skills received, such as Regeneration, a mysterious energy and drink shouldn't be included and have no meaning to the plot, and the op thought acceleration is not original or balanced, and he should also get a skill similar to [Great Sage] that is original. The generic term "Body" should have been replaced with something more fitting, such as "physique." Most of these skills should have been upgraded and combined into one or two more cohesive abilities like [Superior Physique]: gives [Pain Nullification], [Bleeding Reduction], [Minor Regeneration], [Hardened Body]... [Clear Mind] gives [Fear Resistance], [Willpower]... [Enchanced Mind] gives [Analysis], [Model Contraction], [Object and World Visualization]... The progression and him acquiring skills should be slower, instead of him getting all at once.