Review Detail of ScottyTheD in Vegeta Hakaishin[Hiatus]
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Terrible grammar, terrible sentence structure, bad character design, bad story telling and an excuse of English isnt my first language. Don't release a public story if you haven't got an english speaking editor or your english isn't even as good as a 7th graders.
Vegeta Hakaishin[Hiatus]
Odd_Hound
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Thanks for the review. I can't deny the grammar is bad in the first 3 chapters, but after that, it got good enough as I started to use the app to fix that. Plus a reader gave a piece of good advice to use ChatGPT to help with it too, so I believe it got better. Nevertheless, I indeed need to re-edit the first few chapters.
Humility, it's what comes to my head when I see this comment, Author is humble, I wasn't going to read since people were roasting it(and I'm not a fan of vegeta), but since you are trying to get better, and after this show of humility I will give it a try.
Odd_Hound:Thanks for the review. I can't deny the grammar is bad in the first 3 chapters, but after that, it got good enough as I started to use the app to fix that. Plus a reader gave a piece of good advice to use ChatGPT to help with it too, so I believe it got better. Nevertheless, I indeed need to re-edit the first few chapters.