Review Detail of SevenZeros in Moonlit Identity [BL]

The writing of the characters is good, the only mistake I've seen is that some commas are written when they shouldn't be there, and sometimes there is something wrong with the sentences, a single word or so. it was good since the name you used in the characters isn't randomized and there's also a background within the name like Samuel who became Lucifer but that's just in the show Since in the bible, it wasn't stated he became Lucifer but the description that you showed about him is good since Lucifer is known for being prideful There was sometimes no description of where they are but it's still good.