Item: The Cosmic Predator
Rating: 4

OliverfINKingLv31yr

2023-04-27 21:28

This is a review based on my first impression based primarily on the synopsis and the first chapter, so I'll probably edit it in the future. Very good writing quality but the story development, compared to the synopsis seems quite slow. The updating stability will hopefully improve in the future. Finally, the character design and world background don't seem, particularly original or cliché. In the complex, the read is strongly recommended to those who like the awakeners genre. Keep it up author👍

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