The story starts off fine, but for me personally, the power of the MC is progressing far too fast for the age he is. Special Jonin strength and Kage level chakra at the age of 5 is unrealistic even for the naruto world. It would have made more sense to spread the story out and put more detail into an apprenticeship under Onoki and of the author wanted to he could just use timeskips to briefly skip parts of the apprenticeship up until he was maybe 12-15. This is not meant to be demoralising to the author they are doing great as is and this is just a critique of mine personally for the story.
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