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Review Detail of EGOKUNN in Rewind:Evil

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EGOKUNN
EGOKUNNนักเขียน1yrEGOKUNN

Overall, your story "Rewind: Evil" is a fast-paced and action-packed adventure that follows a protagonist who gains incredible powers through a mysterious crystal. The plot is full of twists and turns, and the protagonist's descent into darkness and megalomania is well-portrayed. Your writing style is descriptive, and you do a good job of setting the scene and describing the action in detail. However, there are some instances where the dialogue feels a bit stiff and could benefit from more nuance and subtlety. Additionally, some readers may find the protagonist's actions and attitudes towards others to be unsympathetic and difficult to root for. However, this is ultimately a matter of personal taste, and others may find the protagonist's journey to be engaging and thought-provoking. Overall, "Rewind: Evil" is a well-written and entertaining story that is sure to captivate readers who enjoy action, sci-fi, and fantasy genres.

Rewind:Evil

EGOKUNN

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EGOKUNN
EGOKUNNนักเขียนEGOKUNN

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Hades_Jades:I CAN SEE SOUNDS! I CAN HEAR COLORS! MY HEART IS BEATING BACKWARD!
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is There Blood?

EGOKUNN
EGOKUNNนักเขียนEGOKUNN

It’s a webnovel you won’t be able to see it but yeah

Hades_Jades:is There Blood?
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I CAN SEE SOUNDS! I CAN HEAR COLORS! MY HEART IS BEATING BACKWARD!

EGOKUNN:It’s a webnovel you won’t be able to see it but yeah
1y_the_first
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is this going to be a premium?

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EGOKUNN
EGOKUNNนักเขียนEGOKUNN

no, atleast not any time soon, by premium do you mean like you have to pay to read?.

1y_the_first:is this going to be a premium?
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yes

EGOKUNN:no, atleast not any time soon, by premium do you mean like you have to pay to read?.
EGOKUNN
EGOKUNNนักเขียนEGOKUNN

no, you wont have to pay

1y_the_first:yes
1y_the_first
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yay

EGOKUNN:no, you wont have to pay