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lostfan
lostfanLv141yr
2023-06-26 22:24

your story is interesting, the flow of the story is good, there's are a few problem with the story their is no introduction to the mc, is it a story about reincarnated are not than other than that your story is very good 😊

The Hedge Lord

Lord_Zero_0166
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Lord_Zero_0166
Lord_Zero_0166Author

thanks

lostfan:but anyway your story is great no many kingdom building novel on here
1yr
Lord_Zero_0166
Lord_Zero_0166Author

Thank you for the review. I don't like to introduce the mc in the first chapters. Nowadays, it had became so cliche. I like to explore each part as I write on and the reader reads on.

1yr
lostfan
lostfanLv14

but at least you have to give synopsis

1yr
lostfan
lostfanLv14

but anyway your story is great no many kingdom building novel on here

lostfan:but at least you have to give synopsis
1yr
Lord_Zero_0166
Lord_Zero_0166Author

Haha... I forgot to...

lostfan:but at least you have to give synopsis
1yr
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This story has potential. I like how the author is being consistent with the updates. I can see that there are others who are interested in the book as well. I would like to see his author rise to fame on the ring months. I hope this book doesn't get dropped later on.Other than that, this is a novel I recommend you should check out for yourself.

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I see potential here, it promises to be very good after 12 chapters

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Really liked the ongoing story. I love the gritty and dark fantasy mode you are writing in. The mc is a stoic and mysterious, not that faceslapping trope.

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I really like this story so far and I am looking forward for more chapters. The MC seems interesting and with his travels as a squire and mercenary knight I can see many possibilities for improvements he can make in his territory. I have great hopes for this story.

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22 chapters in. It is worth reading.I like the way the mc fight, swift and ruthless without any quarter.more please.

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Alarzon
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Enjoyed reading uptil nowThis has potential Don't drop it

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Lord_Zero_0166
Lord_Zero_0166Author

Author here!!! This is not a reincarnation novel. Romance and comedy will be there from time to time but not much as the world set in is dark and gritty. Our MC is a Stoic type. He may sound like a reincarnated person due to his weird and intellectual mind but he is not because as the backstory said, He had been a squire to a wandering knight and was a wandering knight himself. The thing is, he has somewhat of a photographic memory. As for me, I have several weaknesses while writing ....1. Action scenes I cannot coordinate well.2. Dialogues 3. Grammar 4. Showing out the emotion of the characters.anyway, enjoy my terrible novel. Do comment and support.

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