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lostfan
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your story is interesting, the flow of the story is good, there's are a few problem with the story their is no introduction to the mc, is it a story about reincarnated are not than other than that your story is very good 😊

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Lord_Zero_0166

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Thank you for the review. I don't like to introduce the mc in the first chapters. Nowadays, it had became so cliche. I like to explore each part as I write on and the reader reads on.

lostfan
lostfanLv14lostfan

but at least you have to give synopsis

lostfan
lostfanLv14lostfan

but anyway your story is great no many kingdom building novel on here

lostfan:but at least you have to give synopsis
Lord_Zero_0166
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Haha... I forgot to...

lostfan:but at least you have to give synopsis
Lord_Zero_0166
Lord_Zero_0166นักเขียนLord_Zero_0166

thanks

lostfan:but anyway your story is great no many kingdom building novel on here