This is really a nice story. But I will say there is something that you are missing. Your synopsis. The synopsis of your story is too short to captivate the attention of your readers. You should consider changing into on that will describe the stories wow-factor, the one that will hook a reader to checking out your story. To any readers, the first thing they check is the title, cover and synopsis before opening your chapter one to read. I hope you find this review helpful
Innovation_Inu
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