Review Detail of 2ND_GABSENSEI in The Undead Apocalypse ;Endless terror

Shameless author self review Guys This is only a draft for my novel so i hope yo can help me to correct i hope you guys will support this novel till the end , I am currently jobless pursuing my dream to have a novel that will become a series\anime or movie , Like a Character everytime i will give my 100 percent to improve my work