Review Detail of Otis_Atis in Fang Yuan in The NWorld (Moved)

The author had a good idea but poor execution. The plot is too fast and many plot holes. The cultivation system was also over exaggerated. I think picking either one instead of mixing them would have been better. However, it could be sth anyone can switch their brain and read for fun. There were some grammatical errors but not as prevalent so give it a short if you don't mind questioning the plot.