Review Detail of electric_winds in This is how I became the traitor of humanity

Aftee reading the first chapter, I would give it a 3.5 out of 5 rating. While the writing quality is decent and the world background seems interesting, the story development feels a bit rushed and the character design could use more depth. However, considering that there is only one chapter available at this time, I am still intrigued and would like to see where the story goes from here