Review Detail of Stardreamer12 in Cruise from Hell

First and foremost, I must say that I enjoyed reading your story the most. The way you described the characters of Duncan and Fiona was great, and their behavior was kind of funny. You also provided good dialogue with vivid descriptions. I loved the bravery of Fiona, especially in the first chapter where she punched her boyfriend - I found that scene quite funny. You have a nice plot and writing style, so I just want to say good job!