Review Detail of noobageddon_ in I got transmigrated into World of One Piece, but no system?

I kinda understand why you ff’s are not well recived, despite having a good gramar and good writing. Cuz you write the most boring scene. I dunno if your doing a build up such, but I skimmed through almost half of the chapter and seems to not miss anything. It might work on OG novel, but on FF where the readers know the plot. I was like ‘please do something interisting’, the lemon chaptie got my attention though. lol