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Honestly speaking, I really love the author's effort into putting comic reliefs into the story. Though there are a few mistakes like the author not using a stable tense, I would say the book has a lot of potentials and I strongly believe practice makes good. Good work author.
The Third Prince
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What I mean is at times the story goes in present tense and at times in past tense and since it's a narrative, it'd be better you stick to past tense. I'm still an amateur though but this is what I know of
Bankets:Can I ask you about the stable tense? What do you think should I do to improve on that?
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Blak_cherry:What I mean is at times the story goes in present tense and at times in past tense and since it's a narrative, it'd be better you stick to past tense. I'm still an amateur though but this is what I know of