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Review Detail of RayPrime in Naruto: The Mechanical Sage

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RayPrime
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Good start and interesting perks, just one request though, don't make him rack his brains to try to stop obito turning to the dark side and trying to save those that would be killed. He isnt compelled to do anything just because he is aware of certain things, if he has enough power then sure. Most fics do that and it is very irritating. Focus more on the character development

Naruto: The Mechanical Sage

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America_Yea
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I'd also honestly rather he effortlessly ended danzo or effortlessly saved obi or at the very least rin.