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Taste_The_Rainbow_8941Lv31yrTaste_The_Rainbow_8941

In my review I'd like to say that this was a good idea. However, said idea was executed poorly. The spelling is horrible, the Grammer is horrible, and the dialogue is horrible. As soon as the Mc reincarnates theirs a 15-year time skip to Canon. No development whatsoever. Out of five, I rate this a 1.5/5 The author seems to have limited knowledge of cursed energy as well. As someone who's writing a jujutsu kaisen fanfic, I should know.

Reincarnated As Sukuna In Black Clover

Quill_Monarch

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Quill_Monarch
Quill_MonarchนักเขียนQuill_Monarch

I am sorry if you didn't like the novel. I am a complete novice writer so I make some mistakes. I will try to improve the things you have mentioned and thanks for the honest review. I appreciate it.

Nyxio
NyxioLv4Nyxio

don't worry you will improve. No one should expect pro writing skills from a fellow fan, though it's always a plus xD

Quill_Monarch:I am sorry if you didn't like the novel. I am a complete novice writer so I make some mistakes. I will try to improve the things you have mentioned and thanks for the honest review. I appreciate it.
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SleepySmile
SleepySmileLv13SleepySmile

u wrote 5 chap in 3 month ur argument won't work

Taste_The_Rainbow_8941
Taste_The_Rainbow_8941Lv3Taste_The_Rainbow_8941

mate, I had 2 months of exams because I'm in university, and I just recently finished and got back into writing. You'd know that if you actually went through my book and read the author notes instead of just clicking on my profile.

SleepySmile:u wrote 5 chap in 3 month ur argument won't work
Quetzalcotal
QuetzalcotalLv4Quetzalcotal

I recommend you to write a rough draft of the story from beginning to end in notes or something. Then, according to that draft, expand the chapters. I made a mistake by starting fanfic's that should be 100's of chapters long leaving two of them. But after that I began to write a rough draft and completed a fanfic with it. Always remember to know the ending of a book before starting it.

Quill_Monarch:I am sorry if you didn't like the novel. I am a complete novice writer so I make some mistakes. I will try to improve the things you have mentioned and thanks for the honest review. I appreciate it.
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