Review Detail of Mood_Acle in Somewhere Far Away From Here

This is not the most in-depth review but I’ pointing out to things that kind of threw me from the flow. Little bit of a spoiler. The point of view switches over to Emma and I don’t really know how to describe it other than dissapointment? I like when she and her brother were together and the point of veiw encompassed them. I feel like the switch to Spright from the kidnapping was excellent but when you tied in Timi and then switched to Emma it kind of felt lousy but I know could not achieve something like that. Spoiler end. Outside of that complaint, I find Spright to be a more compelling charac than Emma, there, I said it. I think the way how you write her to me, brings down the character score but not by much since Spright is there. The writing quality of the story is superb and the most interesting part of the story, to me, is the world. The world building is excellent even though sometimes it is a bit of a pecker to get a sense of direction. Maybe in the future I’ll make a map or something. I find the system of power to be very refreshing in this story as it isn’t a lit rpg rip off. It seems to be a sucker to gain power in and I love it. It gives a pit of anticipation of who he’s gotta kill next, even though it sounds a bit morbid. Good Job! You mad lad. This story is gonna be awesome~ 🕺 Writing Quality : 5 Updating Stability : 4 Story Development : 5 Character Design: 3 World Background: 4