Review Detail of Elona_Alone in THE NEW GOD

I must say, this book is freaking nice and it would have been nicer if chapter 2 is out. However the author needs to make some certain paragraph to be short because long paragraphs draws your attention out of the story . The use if tense was nice but they are some punctuation errors that needs to be fixed. If this are corrected then this book would definitely become big on WN and writer, no offense but change your book cover 😂 it's creepy. Also. I would love to read more, since I'm curious if the main character die in this novel