Item: My Oni System
Rating: 5

DaigoonAuthor1yr

2023-01-01 07:04

Author here… I started this book with the attention to using my developing skills to write a novel that been bugging ever since I wrote my first one. I didn’ t want to start this novel and dropped it like my other ones so I decided to write this novel and only this novel for at least 3 months or until I reach 100 chapter. I want to make a gang leader or a family leader that actually thinks like one not some kid trying to write the wrongs of his city or something. So expect a villian mc and wide amount of side cast.

My Oni System

Daigoon

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TheprimordialGodLv4

I mean he is on a demon planet he should feel at home right I hope later on he doesn’y magically want to be human again like every non human novel but yeah he will fit right in a demon planet he doesn’t even have to be a gang leader as on a demon planet just take over sum land and name ur self demon lord aslong as u strong u can do whatever and I’m positive a former human isn’t as cruel as the demons on the planet so he might look like a child infront of some demons hmm idk

1yr

DaigoonAuthor

Nahh no human, but he will go back one day to reek havoc

TheprimordialGod:I mean he is on a demon planet he should feel at home right I hope later on he doesn’y magically want to be human again like every non human novel but yeah he will fit right in a demon planet he doesn’t even have to be a gang leader as on a demon planet just take over sum land and name ur self demon lord aslong as u strong u can do whatever and I’m positive a former human isn’t as cruel as the demons on the planet so he might look like a child infront of some demons hmm idk

1yr

DaigoonAuthor

I can’t talk about the demon lord stuff right now but it’s a reason he calls it a gang in the beginning

TheprimordialGod:I mean he is on a demon planet he should feel at home right I hope later on he doesn’y magically want to be human again like every non human novel but yeah he will fit right in a demon planet he doesn’t even have to be a gang leader as on a demon planet just take over sum land and name ur self demon lord aslong as u strong u can do whatever and I’m positive a former human isn’t as cruel as the demons on the planet so he might look like a child infront of some demons hmm idk

1yr

Ruby_banks02Lv13

Nice book, reading the synopsis, anyone can tell it'll be a great read but then.... you've got grammatical errors. If you already have errors in your synopsis, how then will your chapters be? I'm not trying to make you feel bad... I want your book to be outstanding, you should correct those mistakes. Use Grammarly for a better grammar. If you need more help, I think I can help you.

1yr

DaigoonAuthor

Thank you using Grammarly was a great idea

Ruby_banks02:Nice book, reading the synopsis, anyone can tell it'll be a great read but then.... you've got grammatical errors. If you already have errors in your synopsis, how then will your chapters be? I'm not trying to make you feel bad... I want your book to be outstanding, you should correct those mistakes. Use Grammarly for a better grammar. If you need more help, I think I can help you.

1yr

Ruby_banks02Lv13

It's good you are happy

Daigoon:Thank you using Grammarly was a great idea
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1yr

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