The story itself is interesting and the plot is great but i find myself getting put off by writing style. Maybe that's just not my preference but it almost seemed as though i was reading a diary instead of a novel. Lol, not that I'm any better tbh. Keep up the good work and continue to improve.
UniqueKarma
ถูกใจ 2 คน
ถูกใจNot completely... This is only my opinion but I feel you just need to occasionally move away from a characters's perspective and describe the situation around them to make not feel like a collection of perspectives on a dairy
UniqueKarma:Thank you for the review, and do i need to change my writing style
AnimeTagz:Not completely... This is only my opinion but I feel you just need to occasionally move away from a characters's perspective and describe the situation around them to make not feel like a collection of perspectives on a dairy