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This fanfic had soo much potential, When i first started reading i had little hope but first 20 or so chapters blew me away they are so well written and executed so properly, keeping story fast pased yet not compromising on details. But somewhere after chapter 20 it starts to decline. To the point where complete chapters are just fillers, or telling about some OC. MC's personality takes a hit, Tools not working as expected and system just giving meaningless rewards. Author is most probably using GPT to enhace writing, but some chapters really feels like author gave promt like "MC needs to catch SCP but tools doesn't work properly, Also wants to expand organization". Now although i gave this big rant it's not that story is bad even after the so called downhill it is still better that many other novels on this site. I would definately recommend to read if you are still on the fence.

Marvel: The Foundation

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