Defintiely a good concept and I felt like the way you wrote it wasn’t a big info dump. It felt like I was watching an anime the way he was rolling on the bike and then began the story of how the world got this way. Though, I wish there was more character thought process than just action and him talking. And in some instances, I want description of the surroundings. Not just the creature if you know what I mean? Let me see how messed up the world is and how much it has change outside of the character just saying it changed. Other than that, it’ a really good story and you should keep up the great work!
K_Phynom
Liked it!
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