Review Detail of Demons_and_I in KvD: Your atypical Katz vs Dogs story

It's not bad. Grammar is an issue, but everyone faces this issue as well so I won't judge too much. Pacing is too slow, and there is a bunch of unnecessary dialogue. A little more action will be preferable, but it's actually not bad. It's pretty good if you give it a chance and i love the story concept. If you put in a lot of hard work, and an even greater amount of editing, this will actually be a masterpiece 👌