Interesting story premise that has lots of potential to grow. Just check the grammar for some parts. But it’s a delightful read.
BunnyStar
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review my story. I am glad that you liked it. I assure you that I willimprove my mistakes in the coming chapters. I hope you keep reading my book and share your valuable feelings with me.