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Review Detail of Freylingo in Fourth Sky: Puppeteer

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Freylingo
FreylingoLv31yrFreylingo

The story has great potential, and I feel the author's hard work in writing this novel, the writing is fine, sure there's space for improvement like certain repeated words, you may use synonyms for that so on and so forth, overall I enjoyed reading I recommended this mostly to those who enjoy creatures thriller type of novel.

Fourth Sky: Puppeteer

Keongmas

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Keongmas
KeongmasนักเขียนKeongmas

Nope! it isn't

RainbowBeheader:harem? i hope it isnt
Keongmas
KeongmasนักเขียนKeongmas

Thanks! I'll continue to improve my writing technique.

RainbowBeheader
RainbowBeheaderLv13RainbowBeheader

harem? i hope it isnt

Keongmas:Thanks! I'll continue to improve my writing technique.