This is the first time I'm taking the initiative to write a review... I read the chapters and personally, I'm fond of stories like this... I think that world-building is a bit weak, personally, it took some time for me to get used to the First person's perspective writing... it could have been presented better.. it looked very complex to me while reading. The plot so far is pretty attractive. While reading I noticed that it was pretty fun to read the novel. I think that a solid conclusion can be made after a few more chapters.. I will give you 4/5 for now.
BorbMeatball
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