first and foremost the story really does interest me however the writing is.... very shet, for one the grammars need some fixing, and what the hell are those long as s paragraphs, seriously make it short and clear, my phone fell from my face as I dose off reading in the early chapters. Characters let's just say too bland, can't even remember their names, or even have one, especially the Mc.
Evorum
Liked it!
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