Review Detail of Stieborn in DxD: Child of Destiny

I really like the concept of Bianka in DxD but there's so many problems in this fic even though I read only five chapters. First the grammar and spelling, not to bash the Author but it's horrible, that I could barely read without getting a headache. Second, is the way the Author describe the characters, I can imagine the basic looks like blonde hair etc, but again the Author didn't put height or anything that further describes the characters. Third, the way the Author is writing is far too dry, like when the Bianka was birthed all the Author did was put the dialogue and slap the characters name there, not even describing how the characters feel. So this book is written by an amateur writer (again not being mean or something merely stating facts) The Author has a long way to go to be able to write a decent fic but that's alright.