Review Detail of Hiraeth_999 in Naruto: Back in Ancient Times
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It started out really good but suddenly mc started making a harem and a very cringe one at that. Added 2 ocs and kaguya to harem and changed kaguyas personality all together. The novel went insanely downhill at that point.It just became insanely cringe. And then start giving random abilities to his wives lol. It's just brain dead writing at this point. Horrible novel. I don't recommend reading this.
Naruto: Back in Ancient Times
Josh_Richie
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First off, The abilities aren't random. If you bothered to understand what my definition of energy was, you'll come to realise that, when manipulated properly, Anyone can achieve anything with Chakra.Personally, I find it to be the most versatile Energy of them all. Well, Mana too, but since Kishimoto didn't describe chakra as an energy source, I decided to do it myself.As for the Harem, I Also didn't want it. Hinami would've been enough, yes, she's an OC, but she would've been enough.Back then, I was still beginning so I wrote all the girls he's ever come in contact with in his harem.On another note, I shouldn't have even written romance. I'm romance, one man's meat is another man's poison. But as you find it cringe, someone else finds it adorable.Thanks Tho
Well tbh the energy system wasn't that much of a bother to me but the harem and romance was horrendously which ruined the entire experience of the novel. It was insanely cringe. Besides romance the overall story was quite alright.
Josh_Richie:First off, The abilities aren't random. If you bothered to understand what my definition of energy was, you'll come to realise that, when manipulated properly, Anyone can achieve anything with Chakra.Personally, I find it to be the most versatile Energy of them all. Well, Mana too, but since Kishimoto didn't describe chakra as an energy source, I decided to do it myself.As for the Harem, I Also didn't want it. Hinami would've been enough, yes, she's an OC, but she would've been enough.Back then, I was still beginning so I wrote all the girls he's ever come in contact with in his harem.On another note, I shouldn't have even written romance. I'm romance, one man's meat is another man's poison. But as you find it cringe, someone else finds it adorable.Thanks Tho