author... the plot is very good and realistic. I absolutely loved the idea but maybe after writing try to run your eyes through what you've just written. Don't take this as a negative comment but kindly do so. In many parts there are some spelling errors which I know is not done intentionally, while writing digitally typing mistakes occur... even for me😅 Overall very nice... I've commented on your paragraphs, kindly check them out. Also, please view my novel and comment on the plot...
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ถูกใจArjun_Sharma_6113:Actually you didn't told me your novel name. Tell me so I can read.