Review Detail of ricebucket0_0 in SHE IS MY FIRST LOVE

I like the plot and looking at how the story goes, I think the author has a good grasp to where the story will go. Chapters need to be edited as there are mistakes everywhere. Although some sentences are difficult to swallow, I like the concept of the book so, I will be looking forward to the next few updates. Good Luck, Author! 😃