Review Detail of ItsNotTheMoon in Bleach: Brave New World

The only thing i don’t like much is the mc cause he seems like a big mouth ,well theres probably a reason but since i don’t know it yet then my opinion won’t change for now . This ff has a big shonen vibe,so it is pretty good . Things to work on would be: -Date of Events,Pacing and I guess the Mc development. Well its just starting so it is not much