Review Detail of SternKunst in Leave it

The progression feels a bit rushed with not enough buildup to daw the reader in, the setting is nice and there’s clearly a good amount of thought that has gone into it. The world is deacribed quite well and is easy to follow. But I would argue it’s mared by the quick progression. Not giving the reader enough time to thoroughly enjoy the setting and scenery. Like your driving cross country and you come across a quaint little town that has some interesting looking buildings, and the driver speaks about them and the businesses, piquing your interest, but then doesn’t stop to let you enjoy what it was that you were just told about, and it goes off to the next destination. The read was nice, but the pace could be slowed down a bit.