Review Detail of PaperyAgate3 in earth bomb

Author here this story is going to be slow and at times can be confusing due to deep magical system and law of the world. I only come up with an idea for 30 or so chapters. If you have any idea, were you like to see the story, go, please comment I'll be reading each comment and I'll consider. Don't feel pressured to vote for this or anything for I'm mostly doing this to get better at writing for my junior year of high school. Enjoy