Review Detail of GenYase in Overlord: To Be Infinite [FanFic]

Writing Quality:4* It's good a few repeats here and there, sometimes using He when meant She (but nor very often), it's and enjoyable to read because its not MTL... Stability of Updates : 4*--- Story Development: I'm giving it a 2* star it's been 20 chapters, and MC still didnt do anything except... fok Shaltear and Albedo (which was rushed and retarded in itself), pointless descriptions and inner monologues a lot of time... Character Design: that's an 1* MC is absolutely dog and simp of Albedo, my God it was so painfull to read it. He may be smarter but hes like a horny dog which humps anything that looks nice in his opinion (too bad he went full Retard in first 5 chapters for Albedo and most of his thoughts were about her) World Background: already in set but added few better things do 4*