Review Detail of Itsurbff_who_reads in Tinted hearts

The world building is very well built and the characters have very cool personalities. it is a very good book so far! I like the plot and the writing. I didn’t give 5 stars because there’s a few things I’d change. One advice would be make sure to keep the paragraphs short. Try to do that because otherwise the writing will look all squished in together. Other then that it’s very good! 😊