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4thBlackGoblin
4thBlackGoblinLv41yr
2023-04-11 05:01

This story has a great idea going. The whole wishes thing and multiple yet same protagonists. And since its in the original marvel, it seems more interesting than most. But I do have some problem with It. 1st. The pace. yeah it's true it didn't happen instantly, but Natasha got too interested too fast. I mean she is a spy for goodness sake. She should have been skeptical for at least 30 chapters in my opinion. 2nd. I dont know if you just don't care, but when you are writing a story, you don't just change stuff out of nowhere. Once something is published, you stick with it. Even if it's trash. okay I guess i can understand that driving yourself further down a black hole is bad, but at least cover your tracks. Rewrite of as if the chapter you want changed. Then put a note to the original readers that there was change. This way, the new readers will have a smooth experience.

Majesty's Journey 2: Natasha's Symbiote in Marvel

That_One_Dead_Ali
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That_One_Dead_Ali
That_One_Dead_AliAuthor

I get what you mean, and I'd honestly love to this story to be great, but I simply lack a few things. for example, 1: I'm seriously bad at writing romance, I won't deny that at all. I'm also just a teenager who's just about to finish highschool, and because of being in a pretty old traditional and religious county, just doesn't have that much romantic experience to begin with. I'm also really not a big fan of just romantic books, and I simply can't find good books with romance and action in it, so my improvement in that part is kinda slow. 2: At the moment, I seriously don't have that much time. because of my exams approaching, even writing new chapters takes a lot of time. but after finishing my exams, I may come back and fix them. and thanks for the review, appreciate it!

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EC_Wolf
EC_WolfLv13

I so wanted to read it, but then you had to go and add that he tells him that he is from another reality/dimension. Rule number one of doing SI's, the SI never tells he or she who they were in their last life and never tells that it's from another dimension, you just don't do that. Story not for me, Good day.

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Unsightly
UnsightlyLv1

I really liked marvel: Sudoper venom, I hope this can be better than it. I do love the concept of symbiotes but I have never seen a good fanfics with them.

2yr
TyrantTron335
TyrantTron335Lv11

Isn't there a Chinese novel called Marvel: Super Venom. is it rewrited or copied or your novel. 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

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Alamsone445
Alamsone445Lv3

J'ai adoré cette fanfiction, sûrement une des meilleures que j'ai lues🤩. J'attends et j'espère la suite avec impatience. Bon travail a vous, vous avez une inspiration qui me convient bien.😉

1yr
Laxmi_narayan
Laxmi_narayanLv4

please upload more chapters. [img=update]

1yr
xNoReadNoLifex
xNoReadNoLifexLv5

Could you add the non-human tag please. I dont like this one bit but since i did not read it i will rate it from that. I just dont understand why a human would give up havIng a human body to gaing a body that requires a host to thrive.

2yr
i_dont_like_garems
i_dont_like_garemsLv1

I read several stories about ms symbiotes and I liked this one the most, looking forward to more chapters!! (Writing through google translator)

1yr
Clockwork_055
Clockwork_055Lv13

man I love this story,but can anyone recommend some fanfiction where MC is symbiot .

1yr
masswolf
masswolfLv4

I love your story I just wish you would update more often.

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