Review Detail of Abigail_Okoi_Obuli in PERHAPS MY LIFE COULD BE BETTER

I'm really not a fan of the writing style or characters in this book. I feel like I'm reading a very poorly written Wattpad book, and I'm struggling to connect in any way with any character. There's many grammatical errors and the flow is off. Narration style/ description is just all over the place. Truly I believe there's so much room for improvement. I hope to read better works from the author in future.