Review Detail of NewKiraKun in 命运删除

Every Author is shameless. I am new in this industry, shamelessness is catching up to me and i decided to give my story a 5 start review too. pls read it first and then feedback. please don't judge hard as it is my first novel and please comment your doubts and suggestions. i am open to anything you guys suggest, i will reply to everyone and try my best, i need your support ❤️