Love the book. The writer's work is impeccable and would love to read more of his work. Though I have something to point out. One of my readers mentioned some time back that when the paragraphs are too long it's hard for someone to concentrate on the book they get distracted easily. Just from the synopsis, I saw that because I didn't see if there were paragraphs it was just one long chapter which might discourage lazy readers. Great work though keep up.
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