Good for how few LoM fics there are but still lower than some other and most mtl so I can only give it a 3. I would say the biggest problem is the picking and choosing of what from LoM rules should be followed either go all or nothing as it makes the story feel to lose and free in that rules will be followed when plot is needed but thrown out when not fun or easy to write around. Example rank 1 powers work on goddess but not on rank 0 item or the fact he can make them but can't make U as they are required for rank 0 powers or effects so no U in the items would make them duds that don't work or items with big side effects and dangers. Not being able to make mixed group items even though they are made in the story and are not rare just have lots of side effects. I get it would make him op at rank 1 or lower but this is already in wishfullment territory from no suffering of madness and jumping ranks so no reason to stop there. The best course of action I could come up with with this fic is speed run LoM then have fun messing around in other worlds. Happy to see more LoM fics and hope you keep writing
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