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It seems like an interesting story, it's just too illegible with how big the paragraphs are. They form huge screen filling walls of text on the phone. Additionally there is a lot of usage of capslock which makes it a tough read, nor is spoken word seperated from a paragraph to make it more distinctive. This story would do well with proper formatting. As it is tough it's illegible for a dyslexic like me and difficult to read through even for those without it.
Game Of Throne: Lord of Nature
Darlau
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Darlau:Thanks, the problem is due to my mother tongue, we are more used to long texts, I will change the chapters separating them and I will expand the Dialogues with double separations
Yes, I am already changing some but notice something, when separating them on the publication page they are separated by double space, when it is published it is single spaced
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST:I look forward to reading it again when you have :)
That's fine, all that matters is that there is space between these smaller paragraphs. Just like I created just now. It makes things so much easier to read. A single line between paragraphs makes it much more legible. See what I mean?
Darlau:Yes, I am already changing some but notice something, when separating them on the publication page they are separated by double space, when it is published it is single spaced
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST:That's fine, all that matters is that there is space between these smaller paragraphs. Just like I created just now. It makes things so much easier to read. A single line between paragraphs makes it much more legible. See what I mean?