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Interesting read, i suggest breaking up your long paragraphs a bit more so it doesn't seem like a wall of text. You also shouldn't capitalize the entire sentence since it makes it seem weird. But it's not bad.

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Thanks for the review. I have changed as per your suggestions. Any other thoughts and preferences are helpful.