Review Detail of Ezra_Neala_Samoans in Marvel's Strongest System

When i found this story with a whooping 80 chaps already whithin 2 days.. I knew that this is gonna be some mtl novels. And my head hurts and my heart bled. I mean come on there are lots of interesting marvel fanfics with over 100 chaps but i just can't continue reading it. What I need when they post this chaps that they are edited already or atleast edited to the point it is readable.