Review Detail of anubis1650 in My Journey in ASIOAF world

Normally I don't have anything good to say I don't say anything at all but this is one of the few fanfics I really do have to say that you really need to delete this and rethink your story it is completely terrible the chapters are too short the main character is nothing but garbage I really do not want to discourage anyone from writing but you need to go back to the drawing board completely and seriously think about how and what you're writing if you're going to do this badly