Review Detail of Obese_Pigeon in The Wild Hunt System

decent, it has good grammar and a very descriptive style of writing but somehow it just feels monotone to me, i read like 15 chapters and so far theres nothing that piques my interest,make my blood pump or make me giggle. i recomend the author to try and think about the way hes writing and potrayng his story right now as even from the first 15 chapters the actions the mc do and what hes saying feels somehow odd since whats hes thinking isnt what hes doing creating a somewhat inconsistent character, ontop of that although i respect the effort having a descriptive writing style doesnt meanto repeat certain things in different ways like for example its better to just make the main character Do the action than writing about the ideas of the main character and then explaining him doing it right after. I mean cant blame the author since the setting in general puts mc in a very uh how do i describe it... advatageus enviroment? the readers cant feel the chaos nor the panic/fear that is, whats gonna happen to the main characterr since he could just well... turn back timeee. welp sry for writing this but i do see a lot of potential in this novel as from a creative point of view its a 5/5 i personally enjoyed the world building. And oh writing the main character as being lost kinda annoys me as hes supposed to be a top tier agent. welp thats all