Review Detail of SmilesS in My Yearn

Stands out amongst alot of generic and dis-interesting tower or fantasy web-novels due to it's beginning and focus on being "dark". Most of the story flows well is neatly spaced and is easy to read. Avoids "rushing" the introduction. Only issues in between sentences are words that don't need to be there, or are unnecessarily "bulking" it and minor grammatical errors. World is relatively fresh given how early at the time this review is (Chapter 7) but hoping it will not devolve into generic tower replica. Novel has alot of potential to do well, just needs more frequent updates besides what was already said.